In Room 2 we have just started descriptional writing. As a class shared writing session we wrote a description about Charlotte Brown as she is away on holiday!! Here it is:
Charlotte
There is a girl in our class. Her name is Charlotte. Charlotte is really smart at maths. When we play bang she always wins. She is six years old. When is was Cross Country she won the six year old race. Charlotte is good at colouring in. She always stays in the lines. Charlotte has medium length light brown hair. She always has it half up and half down. She has blue eyes. We like Charlotte. She is never mean and she is a good class member.
What do you think Charlotte? We saw some of your photos today, they looked so cool and made us all jealous!! Have a good rest of your trip and come back to school soon :) We miss you in Room 2

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